sketch challenge

At least I am consistently useless at updateing my blog. Anyway that has too change. One of my scrapping goals for this year is to become part of a design team or at least try out and so when I saw a call at http://littleshopofsketches.wordpress.com
I thought I have nothing to lose by trying out so this is the sketch that I worked on

and this is my take on it

Anyway if I do get on to the team then I will have to update my blog more and if I dont well at least I tryed and we all have to start somewhere.